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Comment from: chardin77
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Hi Manuela,
A really nice poem about what is seen and what can't be seen - what is hidden to the outer world. Some little mistakes in writing. I think it schould be (Your heart) and (put) But otherwise it gives a clear view and a feeling of a strong mind.
Best regards,
Claudio
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