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I liked this poem and its message very much.
Progress really is what you learn by yourself, and not what you are being taught...
There are a few grammar mistakes and sometimes the flow of the words seems a bit clumsy.
maybe you'll work on that a bit. ;)
Cheers, Fabian Bajorat
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