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Comment from: I Bebe
Text: Dear Anna,
you wrote a remarcable ballad of Gothik horror. I Like it very much. As I also write in English half of the time I understand your plea for correcting mistakes. Forf me it does usually my daughter who lived 13 years in USA. In your fine piece I think I found a minor error in the last line: one can loose HIS head...or ONE'S head.
Kindest regards
Irene
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