The Way of Politics

Dear Jürgen,
I really like the thought behind your poem, and the short, almost slogan-like structure works well, but I did stumble over a couple of the English phrases, though — especially “right away in the middle”. I understand what you’re getting at, but that particular phrasing sounds a little unusual to me in English. There are one or two other places where I had the same feeling. Just a thought, in case it’s useful.

Take care,
cheerio
Rolph