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„Dream“ of Irene Beddies

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readysteadypaddy (onkel.merlinweb.de) Authors profile11/01/2014Answer
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Hey Irene, everybody knows:
love's not always a rose.
Sometimes it's a fridge,
but if you find the bridge
to your lover's heart,
you can melt the ice,
would'nt that be nice.

"Like ice in the sunshine,
like ice in the sunshine,
I melted away
on a sunny day!"

Yours, Patrick


Paule (paul-uhlweb.de) Authors profile10/31/2014Answer
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Irgendwie kommen Gedichte in Englisch nicht so rhythmisch rüber wie in Deutsch... _Liegt's an der Sprache?
Dennoch ganz LG vom Paul

Answer by Irene Beddies:
Das Gefühl entsteht, wenn man sich den Sinn erschließen/ übersetzen muss und nicht einfach lesen kann. Rhythmus hat das Gedicht, aber wie viele andere von mir in beiden Sprachen kein gleichmässiges Metrum. Das macht das Dichten für mich so interessant. Liebe Grüße zu dir, Paul, Irene (10/31/2014)


Alma Brosci (Send E-Mail) Authors profile10/31/2014Answer
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Ich liebe deine beiden Schlusszeilen,
die ja bewusst als "Waisen" angelegt
sind (gedacht als Hinweis für Paul).
LG Inge




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