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„Second Chances, Part One: 'Pain'“ of Katrin Blatnik

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Astaroth

21.11.2006
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Dramatic frame, but good for drawing reader into the story. The 'flashbacks' give motion to the pictures. I like the wordplay with cooking and unprepared. The emphasis on ME in connection with 'torn' even widens the impact. Very emotional style.

For the sake of your readership - keep writing. You're getting there...

BW

Answer by Katrin Blatnik (21.11.2006):
Thank you so much! I always appreciate comments, but such hymnic response coming from YOU means even more to me!! :) Love, 'Kate'

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