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Comment from: Rolph David
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Hello LyraLyra,
Synaesthesia comes into its own in your poem. You can literally hear the lapping of the waves against the bow of the boat and the flapping wings of the flock of birds. Sight is also addressed in the azure blue sky, in the gold-emblazoned wings - different sensory impressions blend here into a single perception. Very beautiful! Thank you for your lines.
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