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Comment from: Monika Schnitzler
Text: nice story, indeed, dear Christina, but sometimes it shows a strange order of sentence-parts:
"and our orchids daintily we sprayed..."
"and this for us was such a perfect trigger"
"in came toy boxes,lego, bears, giraffe"
Es gibt zwar die Objekt-Umdrehung im Falle einer speziellen Betonung. Scheint mir hier aber nicht der Fall.
LG von Monika
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