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Querida Inge,
auch heute in der vorletzten warmen Oktobernacht hat es
kurz vor Mitternacht immer noch knapp 20 Grad (im Schatten!).

Die verflixte 7. Zeile hat Dir einen Streich gespielt.
...brilla on la mesa - sollte heißen ... brilla sobre la m.
In der deutschen Übersetzung fehlt noch ein Wort (den/dem?).
LG Siegfried
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